A Random Story II

The Man In The Faded Suit has channelled my imagination towards his mundane existence. Hence he is back in this new story, as the pro-antagonist caught in the struggle between conformity and humanity. I still desist from assigning him a name, and hope that the charm of anonymity will make it to the end.

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He was on his way back from work, and had to face the inevitable traffic caused by the similarity of fellow human existences. Life had not been too kind to him since his days of travelling by bus, nigh 10 years ago. His status was now that of a ’95 Fiat Uno, which wasn’t anywhere close to his expectations from life. The same could be said of his marriage, kids and the inability to buy his own apartment. The flock of vehicles inched forward, the exhausts encouraging passive smoking. The ancient engine groaned in first gear, seemingly reflecting his own frustration. The compounded effect of the heat, noise and smoke served the purpose of making him frown on himself.

There was a sharp rap on his window, and he jerked his head up quickly, further cursing his forgetfulness. He bridged the three inches between his car and the next, then looked to his right for the source of the guilty sound. He saw a small girl, barely in her teens, standing expectantly with tissue-paper boxes stacked in her hands. His first impulse was to roll up his window and wave her off, as he did with all beggars; Then his eyes focussed on her face- perhaps by chance, or long-forgotten curiosity.

She had deep,piercing black eyes and a somewhat shapely face, hidden though it was under layers of grime. Despite her dishevelled appearance and patched clothes, her firm jaw and angled brows betrayed a dignity that was not expected from a beggar. No, the man  thought, this girl really believes she is selling a product, and not demanding charity. After a moment’s hesitation, he asked for the price of a tissue box. On hearing her gruff response, he hesitated again, wondering whether to haggle with her or let it go. Suddenly, the frustration within him that had momentarily subsided flared up, and his mind screamed that he was not a sheikh to dispose money for petty sentiments. His anger broke through, and he harshly quoted the girl a much lower price. The girl replied grimly, “Sorry sir, but I do not need your charity. I will not sell this at such a low price. If you do not want to buy it, you should have said so. ” With this, she briskly turned away. The response left him dumbstruck for several moments. Then he did something which surprised his own self. He ran out of his car, leaving the engine running, and caught up with the girl in the midst of the sea of wheeled boxes. She turned around, half in fear. The man quickly thrust a wad of notes into her hand, grabbed one of the tissue boxes, and fled back to the solitude of his car.

When he eventually calmed down his accelerated breathing, he pondered about the little girl’s future. Would she retain the dignity she had shown today? Or would she lose it all, becoming one of the many victims of the trap set for girls like her by dealers in human debasement? The fact remained that the young one had reminded him of something important, something he had buried long ago for the sake of his job. As he inched towards his home, he realised the notes he had given her were in fact a substantial fraction of the paycheck he had received that day. But for once, he did not regret his mistake.

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Published in: on June 12, 2010 at 8:56 pm  Comments (12)  
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Rain, and few other things besides

It’s February, and it rained. Not the ballistic downpour like in the monsoon, that we usually associate with depressing moments of life. Rather it was orchestrated in brief spells throughout the day. Rain always has an amazing after-effect (no not the rainbow, I’ve barely seen any in my life and I’ve started to believe it only occurs in movies). The scent of the earth, moist and fresh, which has a wholesome, cleansing air. A cold breeze with the rain-scent is the perfect energy boost, an anti-oxidant of sorts.

Since my bicycle is out of order, I’m denied a Great Cycle Adventure under the rain clouds. meanwhile, thinking of the many contributors to the intricate web of my life, I can’t help but think of how much I could grow if I had my sister’s perseverance and sincerity. We being totally different people, that’s a daunting task. But if there’s one thing I’ve learnt (and it may be the only thing), it’s that it never hurts to try to be a better person, for the sake of one’s own happiness. Being a goody-goody to prove something to someone almost always fades away like any other fad. The majority of meaningful lessons are learnt by stabbing oneself unwittingly every now and then.

Published in: on February 8, 2010 at 7:01 pm  Leave a Comment  
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